Peer review reflection
my peer whose paper i got to review and give remarks about was my friend bryant and his paper was very strong even as just a draft his points were very agreeable and attention grabbing but his transitions were a little awkward and seemed out of place to me. he is doing really well in presenting his subject of VBDs in a general way so as anyone is decides to read his essay can follow along and be engaged in the conversation and possibly decide to pick up the conversation with or against bryant. his paper is much like mine in how we formatted it and presented our points, however i chose to format me presenting my sources from going to general and broad, to specific and laser focused on a particular thing. i believe he could have formatted his sources slightly different and really driven his paper home and finished it. overall it was very good for a first draft and look forward to seeing the finished product.
